Hey!

I really liked the poem! Did you write it yourself? It's really good! Well, I'll be praying, and be encouraged!

Ronisha

Hey Ronisha.    Why don't you share one of your poems?

I HAVE SOMETHING I HAVE SOMETHING :D

(i did this in class when i was mad i guess lol)

                YOU THINK..............

-you think ur the one but yet hes  not the one.If he hurts u so badly then why do u put up with him.He doesnt deserve you!!

~ well,even though he has hurt me so much i still love him! i wont ever stop! He,to me, is still the one 4 me maybe you dont see that but i do.

-hey hes not for you trust me!!he will never love you like you love him.the world doesnt revolve around u!

~well, why do you think of so hateful things just because life doesnt go how u want it? doesnt mean it wont get better! get over yourself!

-hey! why dont u stick up with your self for this!? when youe still heart broken! just because you feel bad doesnt mean you have to make me feel this way! LOVE~LIFE~LOVE

 so yeah thats all i got basically it was about this guy who i cared for so much but i didnt think it would ever work out lol

i like to express myself in different ways so i think poems are better to do that : ]this was kind written in like a 2 person conversation  so yeah... but hey its all good lol :D ttyla8ter britt-britt

um........i'll get mine up sometime today or whenever i get back on...ha...

pretty interesting piece of material thar...

Sydne wrote this yesterday.    I'm posting it here for her - with her permission!

We are known but walk alone as faith grows in steel

The atlantic rises. The greed growns. Soon fishing will be the way of life

The things we need most kills us all and scorches the earth....

Hi everyone!

Ok, here's some of my stuff. It might sound a little strange, but hey, I tried. This poem is kind of contradictory because it's saying that there's no doubt, but yet the love is indescribable. Here goes.......

                                                                                                I Just Know

I don't know how to explain it, but I just know. The way he smiles, his special style, somehow I just can tell. The way he walks, even the way he smells, it's indescribable, but there's no doubt. When I'm feeling overwhelmed and I pour out my heart, he gives me a smile, and he's not suprised at all. I know he loves me, that's a fact. This love is so true, and so deep that I can't comprehend it, but yet I can. From the slight tilt of his head, to the bright twinkle in his eye, it clears all of my confusion in some special, unspoken way. But, don't ask me how I know all of this, because I just know.

Wats up yall this is Jaren I got a rap that i wrote outta bordem this is my latest and its called Ridin Real Fresh

~ When ya see me ridin high in the black SS/ Got the paint drippin' and the rims real fresh

~ Got the blue interior and the mink on the floors/ Got the amp in the back and the 15's in the doors

~ Ridin real fresh all day it's Mr. Carter/ My trunk blaze so hot it make feel like a sauna

* Ridin real fresh all day all day everyday with the neon in the dash and the hood fadeaway

* Ridin real fresh got heads spinnin keep ya lookin real hard when my rims spinnin

* Ridin real fresh on them 23 inch flats put em on my chevy mabye on my cadillac

* Ridin real fresh yall dont know what to do when you see me and my crew on ya block and we ridin real fresh

~ Chevy ridin high like my name Ricky Ross/ Got the top down swervin through the streets cuz im the boss

~ Ole school coupe wit the back out dont kno how to act now/ Its a fact now that candy paint is gonna pimp lac out

~ And every time i back out time slows down/ and makes wonder how i got this truck up in my house

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~ When you see me grippin wood grain when im swithchin lanes/ (Ridin) Ridin real fresh deaf off my hummer man

~ And its the summer man peel out  burn rubber man/ leave doughnuts in the streets and it smokes for days and days

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END

(when you see *-----------> that is where the hook goes)

Well I'm sorry if I come a little sacreligious/gangster and or thugish it was jus somthin i wrote when i was thinkin about cars and how to i would fix them up. but trust me i hav a lot more of where that came from plus some ones i could do 4 church i jus need sum1 who can really SING and i mean SING!!!!

well be praying 4 me please

~ Carter

Hey!

 That was really beautiful! I love that. Hey I want feed-back on my poem! Tell me what you think!

Ronisha 

I WANT A PATENT 4 LYRICS

Hey!

That poem was great! Josh did so good! Wow, I'm just amazed @ all the creativity that everyone has! I'm sorry I didn't bring you anything Stephen. I totally forgot, but you will have something Sun. I promise. I'll be praying, and be encouraged!

Ronisha

Ronisha - I am honestly pleasantly surprised by all of the creativity here!    And you should see the stuff that I haven't posted!     There's so much!

Jaren - we need to look into what it takes to get the works copyrighted.    I don't know if you know this or not, but song writers make much more $$ than the performers.

great stuff going on here---way cool---

now, jaren---the money is not the important part, but you already know that. 

Here's another one from Jessica Harris...

"Love is like seeing the sky for the first time...

Taking in a breath of fresh air that you don't want to let out.

Love is fragile... sweet... kind...

Love is an addiction that can leave you begging for more.

Love can lift you off your feet...  Give you wings to fly.

But without trust, there is no love.

I though you wanted faith-based stuff, so here's one of my first.